Sunday, July 27, 2008

10,000 Words in a Day : 10 tips for writing fast fiction

Oops. That title was supposed to have a question mark.

Actually, my highest per-day word count has been 13,000 or so, achieved during one mad day during NaNoWriMo 2007. I typically write 6-7K on a workday, but if a deadline's breathing down my neck I can manage more. How? (We'll handle 'why' in another post, eh?)

These are my rules-for-writing; try them out and see if they work for you too:

1. Tell everyone close to you what date you'll be writing. If you're going full-time until the novel's finished, tell them that too. Some will hope to make it an audience-participation event: if that helps drive you, great, but if it will be nothing but distraction, be clear about needing privacy.

The real benefit to this, however, is the accountability: now that everyone expects you to write and knows you've got a specific goal, they'll be cheering you on. It's just too easy to wake up on Writing Day and start dribbling excuses all over yourself to put it off again...it's not so easy to let down family and friends. So doom yourself now, and spread the word.

2. Prepare your work. You don't need a detailed outline, but I find one indispensable. Or if you're writing a character based novel, write up personality sheets and bios for your characters before you start. There are many good samples available free on the web: search for "character sheets" plus your chosen genre to find them.

3. Prepare your place. Stock up on everything and get it in place the night before: plenty of water and a few snacks, your writing materials in the right place, a dictionary or other necessary resources close to hand.

4. Prepare your materials. If you write longhand in notebooks, stack more than enough blank ones by your workspace, with a boxful of sharpened pencils or plenty of spare pens. It's not that sharpening a pencil or hunting for a new notebook takes any significant time, but you know it's going to happen just when you've hit that space where words are pouring from somewhere deep inside you, bypassing both conscious mind and Inner Editor to simply pour the tale across the page...that's where magical things seem to happen to the narrative, both in story and style. Don't let anything interrupt that magic if it happens, especially something as mundane as a broken freakin' pencil.

5. Prepare yourself. Let your setting and characters fill your head for at least a day before starting; more if possible. Daydream in the days or hours beforehand, and make notes. Your mind might pull some amazing connections and twists if you simply let it run wild. Most importantly, get plenty of rest the night before. Nobody does anything better fatigued, than well-rested. Writing's no exception.

6. Dream it up. This has saved my storyline many times. If I'm stuck with a story that ended wrongly, or I've reached a point in the novel where I simply can't imagine any way out for my characters (or plot), I go to sleep early the night before, and keep my thoughts on that point in the story, that problem. Invariably I'll dream a solution, or wake up with it playing out in my mind. Try it!

7. Get started early. With nothing more than a good breakfast and cup of coffee out of the way, get writing. Don't turn on the radio, don't read the newspaper, don't anything. Today, writing comes first, so put it first. Laundry, housework, phone calls you need to make...they're just trying to sabotage you. See them for the enemies they are, and refuse to play into their hands. WRITING comes FIRST.

8. No distractions. If you've followed Rule #1, this will be easier. Let your roommate, spouse, partner, or Beauregard the Wonder Dog stand between you and the world today, and ask them to keep messages to themselves until you emerge. If you live alone, turn off the phone, draw the blinds, and stick a big WRITER AT WORK sign to your door. Write that in blood if you have to. (Someone else's blood, obviously...you need your strength.)

9. No doubts. If the blank page or screen is intimidating you, doodle on it or write a title. It doesn't have to be THE title yet; most stories have a "working title" until inspiration hits. Still can't think of one? Ok, try this: The Amazing and Hilarious Adventures of Snow White's Nearly Forgotten Eleven-toed Stepsister. Who cares if you're writing cyberpunk and the title doesn't fit? You've already got TWELVE WORDS down, so you're started! Now GO! GO!

10. Forget all the rules. Rules are fine during the editing stage, and necessary in the polishing stage, but you've got to write something first to get there. In the first draft, it doesn't matter if that all-important first line is utter crap, because you can change it later. What matters is simply that you WRITE a first line, so that it can lead to a second and third.

As you write, don't slow down to fix an awkward sentence or re-check a past chapter to remember whether the protagonist's sister's name is Betty or Bette. Again, that's for the next stage. Just WRITE. And keep writing. Then, keep writing. If you're stuck at a scene that's difficult, skip the bugger and write what comes after (you can fill in the blanks later, too). Now you've got it!

If you type a moderate speed, say 50 words per minute, you'd have 3,000 words an hour...which would be grand, if you could keep up the flow of thoughts and maintain the speed and your fingers didn't fall off. Still, this means that in the whole day you only need about four straight hours of typing, allowing for a few thinks and pauses every few minutes. Add to that your rest breaks, a bit of brainstorming, stretches and a meal or two, and 10K-a-day is really possible. Easily so, once you've got the hang of it.

For a visual of what a thousand words looks like, well...look at this post. It's just about a thousand words long or a little more: I can tell because it's taken me fifteen minutes to write it. It's just a matter of practice, as my mother used to say. She'd watch the evening news, commenting on it, while knitting so fast my eyes couldn't follow the motion of her hands. I once asked her how she could do that so fast, and so automatically.

"Just do it every day for forty years," she shrugged, "and it's easy."

See, you can do this. And just imagine where you'll be in forty years.

15 comments: join in!:

Carol said...

Wow! I'm so impressed you find the time and have the discipline to write so diligently. I sometimes call myself a "freelance writer" but it seems that I either write for $$ (grant writing) or recover from work//family demands. And before you know it there is more paid work on my plate and I haven't gotten much/any writing done!

Susan said...

Hi Carol!
If you're getting paid assignments, you're absolutely a freelance writer, and doing better than most, I'd say.

For fifteen years I put paid writing before fiction (nf articles, ghostwriting etc.), so never wrote fiction. I finally realised I'd broken my own heart that way LOL and had a mid-life crisis of sorts.... instead of buying the shiny red Corvette however, I put my foot down about being allowed to write, and I make the time.

I'm glad to see you write for grants too! I got one from the Arts Council that has allowed my husband to stay home for a year of Carer's Leave so that I can go full-time in September.

Bliss!

Sandra said...

These are really great tips Susan. I'm going to link to them from the online Diving Deeper group,(http://pods.gaia.com/creativewriting) I hope that is all right? The link will be in the resources for writing section.

Susan said...

Sandra, thanks!

Mind? I'd be honoured. I'm glad you stopped by, too...I joined up there months ago, but haven't been back after my last computer fatality (the one that took all my e-mails, passwords, and links with it...)

Which reminds me, I haven't backed up my fiction files in a few hours (it's now a compulsive habit!!) LOL Gotta go...

Sandra said...

Well thank *you* for posting links to Diving Deeper and my website. And for reminding me to back up... now where is that firewire cable?!

Catherine @ Sharp Words said...

Love these tips, by the way. (I can see them being trotted out again in pep-talk emails for November, which would be good!)

Eeek. Backing up. Really should do that, especially because I'll have to clean off my work hard drive (aka my secondary location for stuff) when I finish there the end of next week!

Susan said...

My best ever reminder to compulsively backup my work happened earlier this year:

A friend of mine put her laptop next to the stack of books that was next to her computer (which she was using to watch her Star Trek DVDs).

Then, she puts her fresh hot mug of tea on top of the books (see where this is going?)

Then, she hits the 'Resume' button on the DVD menu, only it's not the Resume button after all -- OH NO!! -- it's the Eject button!

DVD Drawer lashes out to strike mug, mug tips over to drown laptop...

Work go bye-bye.

And I laughed so hard we're not friends anymore. God forgive me, it was worth the laugh; I could hardly drive myself home.

BACK.
UP.

Sandra said...

Not that this is any encouragement not to back up, but here is what to try if you tip a cup of coffee on your laptop keyboard (it worked for me...):

immediately turn the laptop upside down (while turning off and unplugging it...). Hold it upside down for as long as you can. Shake a bit. If you can prop it upside down so much the better. Once it has definitely stopped dripping, turn it over and mop as much of any remaining liquid up with a tissue (folded, pressed between and under the keys).

Leave the computer to dry for at least a day, maybe two days.

Pray.

Turn it on.

Mine was fine, it did smell of coffee for quite a while...

Susan said...

Thanks, Sandra: I wrote those down and posted it for myself, just in case!

I would think the coffee smell a bonus, however.
;-)

I'm such a hopeless klutz that I never allow any such things near my computer; and since I write in bed it's not very practical anyhow.

But still VERY good to know, especially with kids around!

carbags said...

Great tips. Seriously, brilliant tips. As an individual more than a little intimidated by the blank screen let me tip my hat in your direction and say cheers. So..cheers (tipping hat while typing)
Love the blog by the way...

Susan said...

Thanks! glad to see you here!

All of this I came up with in self-defense; I'm much better at immersing myself for huge blocks of time than dipping in for a few minutes a day.

narocroc said...

Great post Susan, I feel like writing 10,000 words right now!

Dee Yoder said...

I found you at Rachelle Gardner's blog party--what a wonderful blogger you are. I'm finishing my first novel started at NaNo 2008. These tips are just what I need to carry on. Thanks!

Susan at Stony River said...

narocroc, I hope you did!

Dee, thanks for such lovely words--and good luck with the nano novel (I'm still working on mine too; it keeps getting bumped by other projects... *sigh*)

website design said...

saw your blog and i read it. WRITER AT WORK.. i like that. i think im gonna put that sign at my door as well... :)

About This Blog

The writer's markets and publications mentioned on this blog have been found in a variety of print and online directories. I receive no compensation or reward for these listings and am in no way affiliated with any of these publications beyond my own freelance submissions. I'm a writer, Jim, not a doctor.

I created the header image from one of my own photos taken on a visit to Belgium last November, which I modified using Serif's free software, PhotoPlus 6.0. Meaning I modified the photo, not Belgium.

Search This Blog

Loading...
This blog is made possible with help from
Hosting Ireland

Meanwhile, on Twitter...

  © Blogger template Coozie by Ourblogtemplates.com 2008

Back to TOP