Friday, June 12, 2009

Friday Flash 55: Chapter 2

Four blocks more; only the wipers spoke: swish thump...swish thump.

"Here," she said, "the white house."

He pulled in, noticed the sign on the gate.

"O'Connor?"

She sighed at the inevitable. "Annamarie."

"Owen," he said.

She wondered what to say next.

Thanks for the ride, but go away? My husband's a serial killer?

...

"Coffee?"


---

I'm making it up as I go now, pure fiction. I asked my teenage daughter and my husband for help last week, at the supper table.

"I want it to be a romance," I said, "because I started it with how Mom and Dad met. But now I don't know what to make these two do. Any ideas?"

Oh, plenty ideas... mostly involving car wrecks, murderous ninjas, and zombies. I think I might be on my own here; or, expect ninja zombies to wreck their car shortly.

Anyhow, to join in the fun, write a story in 55-words(no more no less), post it on your blog, then tell Mr. Knowitall a.k.a. G-Man by leaving a comment on his own Flash-55 post. See you there?

If you like writing short, here are some paying markets for Flash Fiction beginning with "B" :

Big Pulp wants pulp fiction in all its forms, including adventure, humour, and romance—they also like comics, photography, and art. Have a look.

Bards and Sages looks for short speculative fiction (horror, fantasy, science fiction, etc) under 1,500 words, including serialisations.

Bound Off seeks original literary short stories for podcasts, between 250 and 2500 words. They pay $20 per story: not a bad rate per word at all.

Breath & Shadow accepts a wide range of creative writing from contributor with disabilities (which they define broadly—the link takes you straight to their guidelines).

Broken Pencil publishes a wide range of creativity; "we like it weird", in as little as 50 words.

Bust Down the Door and Eat All the Chickens is a journal of the absurd and surreal. Er, obviously. Keep it under 2,000 words.

"C" you next week (ha ha).

Now it's time for me to bust down the refrigerator door and eat all the donuts!!

What, no donuts?

I hate dieting.

24 comments: join in!:

G-Man said...

Dinner table inspiration?
hahahahahaha
I LOVE it!!!
Excellent 55 My Dear...Thanks.
Thanks for embracing my little Friday Funfest...You are a very welcome addition.
Have a Great Week-End...Galen

Dr.John said...

A great 55. I wonder how somebody would respond if one used the serial killer line instead of " coffee".
Perhaps." Could I come in and see him . I've never seen one of those."
Looking forward to the zombies

Susan at Stony River said...

Galen, thank you! I should know better than to consult my family on such matters...*sigh* Ah well. Zombies ahoy!

Thanks, Dr. John: I think I may need to revise, now liking your choice better! LOL Yes, I think we need to make it fun, zombies and all.

J said...

So...which one is a zombie and which is a ninja? ;) Didn't someone write a succesful book about Jane Austen and zombies? hmm...

Susan at Stony River said...

Jane Austen and zombies? J, I MUST have that!! Seriously--

Mona said...

that's scary...now he will get killed if he accepts!

Ken Armstrong said...

Sense and Insensibility?

Pride and Pancreas-juice?

I give up. Nice Flash. :)

Susan at Stony River said...

Mona, don't worry--HE might turn out to be the killer! (Heeey, wasn't this supposed to be a romance??) LOL

Ken, flash YOU anytime, baby.
;-)

Alice Audrey said...

I'll bet you could find a way to make Ninja zombies romantic.

Thom said...

Wonderful 55. You write well and I enjoy this. I'm looking forward to the zombies... Have a great day :)

Peggy said...

What about Spock...is he making the coffee cause I know that he's not the serial killer!
I love it too, your mind takes us through so many twists!

Susan at Stony River said...

Alice, I'm afraid that's a challenge I simply may not be able to achieve... but I love you for the vote of confidence! LOL

Thom, I shall read up on zombies I suppose, with all of you wanting them now. You're just so sweet I want to dunk you in my coffee.

Peggy, thanks! In *my* fantasy, yes Spock would be making coffee... but I shan't be airing such fantasies here! (My husband already confiscated all my Original Episode Star Trek dvds... *sigh*)

Cat said...

Oh this is good - the sounds and conversation it all added to a good end!

hope said...

Yep, I'm hooked. On your story and on creating these things!

Bad news: there's actually a photo which would complete mine so until I get that idiot brother...I mean younger sibling...to cough up the photo, I've decide to wait until next week.

But you'll be pleased to hear it's about...Spock. :)

Susan at Stony River said...

Thanks Cat!

Aren't they Hope? I'll be looking forward to next week then--and, WOO HOOO!

anthonynorth said...

Now that's the way to end a 55 :-)

♥ bfs~"Mimi" ♥ said...

Why are we ALL talking about dieting lately???? It's morbid! :-)

Susan at Stony River said...

Thanks Anthony!

Mimi, I imagine it's the impending horror of the sleeveless dress season...
:-(
I know I'm not ready.

Donut?

SandyCarlson said...

I am going to do my homework now...try to write 55. Yours are so very excellent that I feel inspired.

For some reason, the Harry Chapin tune Taxi comes to mind. The rain, I think.

Eaton Bennett said...

Oh yes, do give them a romance! I've not been to your blog before, I will be back, your 55 post was a fun read.
I also want to explore the photos on your other blog.

Eaton :)

Susan at Stony River said...

Sandy, I'll look forward to seeing yours; they've been quite a challenge to me but good for me I think. The strict word count makes you measure every single word and reading everyone else's show how even a tiny passage can have a lot of impact.

Thanks, Eaton, and welcome! Yes I wanted romance too and think it may still go that way; maybe because it's something I so rarely write, otherwise.

Thom said...

Dunk away my friend...dunk away :)

Akelamalu said...

Trust families to come up with something gory! Great 55 m'dear. x

Susan at Stony River said...

Thom,
:-D
Ah sweet dreams.

Akelamalu, I did walk away wondering, 'what was I *thinking*', to ask these people? LOL I should have been able to guess the outcome... LOL

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