Welcome to (the very first) Microfiction Monday,
where a picture paints 140 characters.
Here's this week's picture, and my story to go with it:
"Oh shut up," he said. "Remember who's paying for dinner?"
She excused herself to the ladies' room.
An hour later, he remembered who drove.
About Microfiction Monday
Microfiction means the shortest of short stories. Think Aesop's fables, comic strips, or even jokes: they're complete stories that can be told in under a minute. For this game, the limit is a tweetable 140 characters or fewer.
Every Sunday evening I'll post my own 'microfiction' inspired by a photo or illustration. If you'd like to join me, just use that week's picture for your own 140-story, and let your imagination go wild. If that degree of brevity scares you, feel free to use my own microfiction of the week as your first line instead, and spin something longer.
You can leave your story in the comments here, or post on your own blog and leave your link in these comments instead: I'll switch to Mr. Linky if we get a few folks playing along.
Hate counting letters and spaces? Try writing your story using Design 215's character counter, which will count for you as you type. Twitter counts down your characters from 140 as you go and is free to join. Microsoft Word will count for you too, of course, as part of its word count feature under the 'Review' tab.
Photos will be from my own archives; illustrations are by Dover Publications.
And finally, why 140? A whole new fiction market has arisen via mobile phone texting and on Twitter, who limits 'tweets' to 140 characters including spaces and punctuation. It's fast, it's fiction, it's fun. Here's a list of Twitterzines if you'd like to read some shortest-of-the-short stories:
Nanoisms
PicFic
escarp
Thaumatrope
Seedpod
Tweet the Meat
Slightly longer works are at:
Flashshots
Flashes in the Dark
Flashquake







26 comments: join in!:
"Yes," she said, "It's really nice and all. Classy, like, but the radio reception is pure rubbish." I could only sigh and smile to myself.
LOL
Definitely a woman's view of a car! I hope it was a present?
Thanks Ken!
Great Post Susan and to quote the Immortal Bard, {I heard this somewhere else}.
A poet who never had a poem that he created published was going to go down in life with the Shortest Poem Ever.
It was Titled "Fleas" and went
"Adam Had Em"
Oh I sent ya an email to an invite at the blog. You are to test your James Bond Girls Prowess. And the Answers are provided.
So far Hope is the only one who has taken a stab at it, and I want you to know she is "Whoopin Ass" with her answers, only got 5 wrong.
Bill, that's the shortest one *I've* heard anyhow!
Hope's got me beat, if she got 10 right. Good heavens. It's been 20 years since I watched James Bond, and back then I wasn't watching the girls! LOL
All right, Susan. I wrote 77 comments last weekend, I ran a Coffee House on Friday, my schedule has totally sucked, but I can't resist, so I'll play:
"I already ate!"
"What?"
"I said: I already ate"
"What?!?"
"I said: 157 RD..." Smash.
Not sure if I've written anything this short before.
"Your mother did it again and you said nothing!"
"She did what?"
"Said your car looked better than me."
"And?"
Damn women LOL. Great story my friend. Nano Nano. Mine is up and his HERE. This is going to be fun sister. Thanks for starting this :)
This is great. I love the name. The notice was too short though and I am not playing this week. Too burnt to try to create tonight. Today was quite the day.
This is such a great micro story. Hilarious! I love how you think. You have the most wonderful kickers at the end of your stories.
Elizabeth! :-D
I thought the schedule might be rough lately; our school's the same this time of year coming up to break. SMASH brings back memories... LOL. I'm so glad you played, thanks!!
Ofira, OMG, you wrote a dialogue between me and my husband. The "And?" is *perfect*. AGH! I loved it anyway. ROFL
Thanks Thom! Dang, I forgot to blame you for it all in the post--will give credit where due next week for certain. Can't wait to see what you did with it!
Quilly, shouldn't you be sleeping off the weekend? I'm amazed you managed a comment at all but I'm glad you did. Can't wait to hear how it all went, too--will be on my way to yours in a few.
Kay, thanks, but I can't take credit--I adapted it from a true story my sister told me. She was on a date and after an evening of small-stuff arguing, he told her something like "You're forgetting who's paying for your dinner" so she grabbed her car keys off the table and said "You're forgetting who drove," and took off with him after her, all the the way to the parking lot but she was quicker and she *left* him there. I laughed so hard, never forgot it.
THUMP!
"Oh darling, I think you hit that rabbit."
"Never mind dear, we can take it home for Cook to deal with."
.........
Sorry, that's the best I can do. This is a very very hard challenge. You are evil, Susan.
Why thank you Catherine LOL. What a way to capture that upper-class mindset of bygone days, in so few words: characterisation at its best! I LOVE it but oh, poor wickle wabbit. (yum!)
Great story to go with the picture Susan.:)
I saw this at Thom's and decided to join in. I need exercises in conciseness! And I loved the creativity in seeing what everyone came up with.
Mine is here:
http://barbarah.wordpress.com/2009/10/19/microfiction-monday/
Thanks Akelamalu!
Barbara, thanks for joining in--I need practice in tighter writing too, I spend more time editing than writing because I'm so darn wordy. On my way to see yours!
Haha sort of intellectual Twitter! Excellent.
ROfL, Baino, TWITTERATURE!!
As long as it doesn't make us into nitTwits...
Damn...no I have to keep coming back here to read what others wrote pffft LOL. This is a great success I do believe :) Well done Susan and Congrats :)
Aaww, thanks Thom! Yes I think I'll hook up Mr. Linky next week (which gives me six days to figure out just *how*)
Thanks also for pushing me into it, btw.
;-)
Susan, you have a great start here! I've posted mine at my blog, but here it is as well. I love Dorothy Sayers' Lord Peter books....
“Peter, do you think she minds me driving?” He replied, “ Harriet, you are the only woman in my life besides Mrs. Merdle.” The car purred.
http://southlakesmom.blogspot.com/2009/10/microfiction-monday.html
You made me do it. ;p And oddly, I "did it" in 139 characters?!
"Are you serious?" she sighed. "You win the lottery and buy a car that looks like a bumble bee on steroids?"
Sadly, money can't buy taste.
Whoa, Southlakesmom, the car as character! *slaps forehead* I love it!!
Hope, I love you for it!! I even included the 'long version' rule just for you, but I like your shortie.
Of course, he'd better reply, "No dear, I bought YOU a car that looks like a bumble bee on steroids"! LOL
I think we are Litwits.
Oh Catherine. Belongs on a T-shirt.
Push...it was more like tug of war LOL
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